Your slides are not always organised logically. You jump between different families. Some of your information is confused & not necessarily accurate, remember this was specifically about the orchestra, not a band. The general layout, pictures & text, is very good as is the inclusion of references at the end. Shame you handed it in 3 weeks late!
Your slides are not always organised logically. You jump between different families. Some of your information is confused & not necessarily accurate, remember this was specifically about the orchestra, not a band. The general layout, pictures & text, is very good as is the inclusion of references at the end. Shame you handed it in 3 weeks late!
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